Comments on: Dark Eyes News

By: Manahil

Manahil — Thu, 18 Jul 2013 02:27:09 +0000

i think that ariel should find gabe and they tell each other that they love each other <3

By: Lilia

Lilia — Thu, 02 May 2013 21:24:55 +0000

i just read it and i was hoping for more, i think you should explain why she was able to make him stop from killing her, there must be something speciall about ariel over gabe, something that could save him and stop him from killing more people. Greetings from venzuela

By: Jamie Campbell

Jamie Campbell — Thu, 25 Apr 2013 01:06:45 +0000

Hi Mikayla, excellent suggestions, love them. Thanks for your contribution!

By: mikayla

mikayla — Mon, 22 Apr 2013 05:33:32 +0000

I think it would be great if she finds him and to be able to stay together they have to go on a ” journey” to some remote weird destination tp break the curse and along the way they they learn more about each other while fighting for the one thing they have in common…….their love of each other n

By: Jamie Campbell

Jamie Campbell — Wed, 17 Apr 2013 04:43:38 +0000

Hi Eleanora, thanks for the comment! I’m glad you liked the story. Non-stalkerish, I like it

By: Eleanora

Eleanora — Tue, 16 Apr 2013 21:28:07 +0000

Sorry, I forgot to mention that the “trip”, or whatever, is so her parents don’t know she’s out “stalking” a black-eyed, (so-called) ” freak” guy.

By: Eleanora

Eleanora — Tue, 16 Apr 2013 21:23:43 +0000

I think Ariel is good for Gabe. She should track him down… but not in a so stalker-ish way. Kinda like have her leave for a “school trip” or something. I don’t know… And I was so IN LOVE with that short story!! I’m glad your making it a book! C; <3

By: niccolette

niccolette — Mon, 08 Apr 2013 01:21:57 +0000

Or maybe you can have a black eyed leader who falls in love with ariel and so he tries to pull her and gabe apart. Sorry i just thought of that and i thought i might as well mention it.

By: Jamie Campbell

Jamie Campbell — Fri, 05 Apr 2013 00:40:14 +0000

Hi Niccolette, thanks for your comments! I love your creativity.

By: Jamie Campbell

Jamie Campbell — Fri, 05 Apr 2013 00:39:44 +0000

Thanks for your input, Jasmine!