The short story Dark Eyes was released in February 2013. Since then, I have been inundated with requests from people wanting more of this story.
So, due to the overwhelming demand, I have decided to make Dark Eyes into a full length novel. But I’m not going to do it alone, I want your feedback. What do you want to happen to Ariel and Gabe? What do you see in their future? Should Ariel give up on Gabe because he’s so dangerous? Should she let him go? Or should she chase after him and make good on her promise?
I want your opinion about Dark Eyes. Tell me what you want to see and you never know, it just might make it into the book.
How to participate:
1. Read Dark Eyes if you haven’t already. It is available here for kindle and here for all other formats for free.
2. Comment below about what you would like to see next in the story.
3. Make sure to include your email address when you leave the comment.
4. I will contact the best suggestions and you will be acknowledged in the book. You might even get a character named after you!
I expect the book to be published in either May or June of this year. Entries are open right up until the end of April. Thanks for visiting and I look forward to hearing your comments.
Update – This competition is now closed. Thank you to everyone who emailed me or commented below. I love your suggestions and can’t wait to share with you what Ariel and Gabe do next.
The winners have been notified by email. I will now enter the writing cave and complete the novel. Expect it to be released in June 2013. Make sure to sign up for the newsletter so you don’t miss it.
Update – Dark Eyes: Cursed, the novel is out now! Check it out here.
29 Mar 2013
I would love to see Ariel and Gabe end up together. They are soul mates! They have to be together.
05 Apr 2013
Thanks for your input, Jasmine!
04 Apr 2013
I would like to see them end up together but i think it should be very difficult for her to find him and convence him they belong together and maybe you just maybe once she does convience them something greater like a black eyed leader could try to tear them apart or maybe even a love triangle. I cant wait for the book to come out
05 Apr 2013
Hi Niccolette, thanks for your comments! I love your creativity.
08 Apr 2013
Or maybe you can have a black eyed leader who falls in love with ariel and so he tries to pull her and gabe apart. Sorry i just thought of that and i thought i might as well mention it.
17 Apr 2013
I think Ariel is good for Gabe. She should track him down… but not in a so stalker-ish way. Kinda like have her leave for a “school trip” or something. I don’t know… And I was so IN LOVE with that short story!! I’m glad your making it a book! C; <3
17 Apr 2013
Sorry, I forgot to mention that the “trip”, or whatever, is so her parents don’t know she’s out “stalking” a black-eyed, (so-called) ” freak” guy.
17 Apr 2013
Hi Eleanora, thanks for the comment! I’m glad you liked the story. Non-stalkerish, I like it
22 Apr 2013
I think it would be great if she finds him and to be able to stay together they have to go on a ” journey” to some remote weird destination tp break the curse and along the way they they learn more about each other while fighting for the one thing they have in common…….their love of each other n
25 Apr 2013
Hi Mikayla, excellent suggestions, love them. Thanks for your contribution!
03 May 2013
i just read it and i was hoping for more, i think you should explain why she was able to make him stop from killing her, there must be something speciall about ariel over gabe, something that could save him and stop him from killing more people. Greetings from venzuela
18 Jul 2013
i think that ariel should find gabe and they tell each other that they love each other <3